Sunday, May 9, 2010

The Other Me Comments

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Blurry vision in a stormy night
Wondering what to do right
Where did i lose my peace of mind
That i'm craving so hard to find
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twilight by the river
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Hussein Ahmed 09 May 2010

Great poem that conveys the feeling of emptiness quite well. I like how this developed from 'Blurry vision in a stormy night', ie. confusion/unclearness, to just emptiness. Please take a look at my poems if you would. Peace.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 May 2010

Chasing my silent heart beats likedthis expression write and share. Good luck to u invite u to read my poems too. God blesss

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