A friend drew me aside one day
And, in me did confide
Of problems with a wayward Son
Such as he could scarce abide
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Amazing poem Richard, wise and thoughtful; flows like a river.
Richard, Your poem flashed back to my mind Oliver Goldsmith's 'An Elegy on the Death of a Mad Dog' that I read several decades ago. You have written it in such a natural and lucid style that it straight way impresses the mind and heart. Wisdom and art are beautifully combined into your poem. It was pure enjoyment reading it. CP
A wonderful poem Richard, great idea and developed with skill. Best wishes, Andrew
Splendid poem Richard! ! It's best not to give advice to friends, unless you've worn that persons shoes, it might seem the thing to do 'at the time', but in the end - you loose.. Best regards! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad
Giving advice is a dangerous practice brcause you see from a different viewpoint so your words lack relevance. Best to listen patiently sympathise and nod wisely