Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

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Saturday, December 16, 2023

The Other Half Of The Simile Comments

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The litter scattered through the house
is like the sands of the Sahara
that somehow stealthily sneak
surreptitiously past my windowsills
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Kim Barney

house simile

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Rebecca Navarre 11 January 2024

Very creatively and magnificently expressed! .. Ever so very many 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 11 January 2024

Brilliantly written! .. Love the way you put, that somehow stealthily sneak surreptitiously past my windowsills! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 December 2023

Compelling images and great analogy. I can see the litter and sands scattered through your house.

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Grace Diane Jessen 18 December 2023

It's nice to know where the idea for that poem came from. I was trying to picture your house with all that sand or litter!

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Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

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