The Other Half Of The Simile Poem by Kim Barney
The Other Half Of The Simile
The litter scattered through the house
is like the sands of the Sahara
that somehow stealthily sneak
surreptitiously past my windowsills
and spread, unbidden and unwelcome
all over my domain.
Brilliantly written! .. Love the way you put, that somehow stealthily sneak surreptitiously past my windowsills! ..
Compelling images and great analogy. I can see the litter and sands scattered through your house.
It's nice to know where the idea for that poem came from. I was trying to picture your house with all that sand or litter!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/3/2025 7:46:32 AM # 1.0.0
Very creatively and magnificently expressed! .. Ever so very many 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++