Saturday, May 7, 2011

The Other Half Of My Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hear your whisper, I look but you're not here.
I call your name, voice breaking with each tear
Your shadow passes but I cannot touch
My heart burns, I love you so much.
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John DeBona
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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