Sunday, May 4, 2008

The Orphan Comments

Rating: 4.8

A look of sadness on his face
He walks on the bare snow, down the street
Shivering away in the cold
With a pair of dirty, filthy feet
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Ahvana Dutt
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Rani Turton 07 June 2008

The compassion in this poem is touching, as touching as the plight of the orphan. Thanks for this one.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 May 2008

it s a tragic......their life were often overlooked by us. well written ahvana

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Kee Thampi 11 May 2008

mangle of sadness....the way poet makes it People are cruel and Oh! so rude Rich children never think Of giving him even a bit of food Poor boy, a day got only a bottle of water to drink

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Priyanka Shetty 04 May 2008

sad but true....... nice write.... thanks for sharing.........

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