Thursday, November 5, 2015

The Orphan Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forlorn little boy
Playing with his toy
Sadness, he can't hide
Peering through the window from inside
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Billy Loving
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Margaret O Driscoll 03 January 2016

Such a sad piece so well expressed Billy!

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Wes Vogler 08 December 2015

last stanza line 3 starring/staring Good poem thank you....................

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