Friday, October 17, 2014

The Orphan Comments

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A forgotten boy
Sat cheeks buried
In the cups of his hands
Worried that he and he alone
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Tony Adah
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Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2014

Beautiful poem. In a beautiful you have expressed the bitter truth of an orphan. Very true said in few lines, the world looks down on this specie.... The world looks and blinks At this specie The one that the zealots Vow to suffer In this place where We proclaim love! Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 17 October 2014

Born in to the depth of the world, beautifully expressed poem in the orphans and feeling is expressed well. Nice job.

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