The Origin Of Life And Earth Comments
The clouds move gently
And join them together
Then makes them into stack
The rain comes out of it
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well i think it is a brilliant thinking, the own imagination of how the world must have been created......just brilliant and beautiful
Not bad but such themes require grandeur trratment...... You u have to bring that diction and syntax and even tone that appropriate to such themes ........... divinity ought to be veiled in sublimity..... Keep doing good job
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7/20/2025 1:31:32 PM # 1.0.0
A great description of how the world was created, you have a great imagination delivered with panache!