Tuesday, April 25, 2006

The Orient Comments

Rating: 4.3

In a place where pale pink
blossoms fall like rain.
Land softly on the heads
of quiet people.
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Joyce Chelmo
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Gregory Gunn 09 May 2006

Now that's a serene scene you paint with words, Joyce.

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Duncan Wyllie 25 April 2006

This pulls at the readers heart from all the right dirrections, Brilliant! and so rewarding to read, love Dunacn

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Paul the Lion 25 April 2006

Ah, great poem indeed...perfect for hippies like me...learning to quiet one's own spirit can prove to be utmost difficult, I hope he suceeds

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