Saturday, April 26, 2008

The Orator Was Proud… Comments

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It was forbidden to see dreams…
In the depth of the stage
The streak of light…
Was crossed out.
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Janri Gogeshvili
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Ben Gieske 06 May 2008

No dreams is the end of life. Alas! I like your interchange of sight and sound: In the depth of the stage The streak of light… Was crossed out. The deafened life With its eyes put out, Waved its hands in the hall,

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Abha Sharma 26 April 2008

the scene painted by you in these lines is so attractive that i could visualise.. the orator's giggling, the fruitless womb all very creative..and reveals the deep thought...

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LOVEFOOL Aka 26 April 2008

A very nice piece quite deep and thought provoking, I loved the line in the fruitless womb of the mind thank you Nik

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