The Orange Moon - Tanka Comments
The orange moon walks
With me to the still river,
Shares its light, borrowed
From the great generous sun.
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I love the way when reading your poetry, I can close my eyes and feel the beauty of the poem! ..
Picturesque poem. Colour orange 🍊 moon moves to the still water
Marvellous Tanka, dearest Rose! The Orange Moon is so fascinating specially as it walks with you to the river.
Borrowed light from sun not to be used by self, but to be shared by all.Great work expressed in nice vocabulary.
Looking at the moon in my sky last night someone had taken a bite out of it as if it were a biscuit.
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You write with such heart and beauty within that illuminates to all! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++