The Orange Comments

i like this one, daniel! and why? one may ask. it flows logically, and the tone is pleasing and consistent throughout. it has a good simile and good metaphors. it has a nice shape. it ends with a zing. nice! for a different take on this golden fruit, you might check out my little poem, navel orange. glen

A very lovely poem. Even the little thing can be so vivid and meaningful under your pen. Enjoyed.

This is my favorite poem of yours so far. Really amazing similes, I can tell you've put some thought into this poem. The lightness of transparency, the snake skin peel, the handless grass! These are amazing tropes. Good job.