The Optimist Comments

This is brilliant...I can actually see the optimist telling everyone in each window So far So Good until, well....Awesome poem. A 10.

I've never been one for writing humorous verse, but that's only because I don't have the knack that you display here and in some of your other works I have read recently...... I love to read this style of poetics as to me it displays acute wit and cleverity, which are two very crucial elements in composing good poetry, prose or short stories...Solid Penning, Ray ~Fj R