Thursday, May 12, 2005

The Operation Comments

Rating: 4.0

Slowly, meticulously breathing
withdraws his hand with the small blade
a bleeder now, nipped in the bud
compartment syndrome is a maybe.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 13 May 2005

Very well written Herbert.Simple execution with a gentle flow.Thank you.

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Sandra Osborne 13 May 2005

Ahhhh, and I say that you are the master. You are the goal that I reach for, the talent that feeds me. As always I love you, as always, you are my friend.10++

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