When treachery captured
the beauty of chastity
Earth was converted to
a cold room full of smoke in
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In the era of marginalised truth who listens to the wounds of poetry? - - we do especially those written by PH members who are serious about poetry- - like this one! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
In the era of marginalised truth who listens to the wounds of poetry? - - - - -One can never go wrong, if they study the comments of Daniel Brick on poetry. He appreciates the qualities in Soran's poems that are deep runners both philosophically and poetically. Another poem that deserves deep contemplation because it will yield nuggets of knowledge for serious readers. 10++++
Dear Rose; thanks you for choosing my poem to read and rating it, I would appreciate your efforts and time spending with my humble work, have a nice day, take care
" Separate life from conflict So that we are able to know we exist" . Powerful and insightful lines from a wonderful poem. Beautifully crafted, powerfully conveyed with compelling imagery. To my Poem List.
A powerful poem. Poignant yet the message is so strong that it can propel one to go to a direction. most beneficial to attain our purpose in life. No matter how strong the forces of evil, if we are determine to resist its power, we would be able to conquer the claws of darkness.
Life is full of pains, tragedies and treacheries. In life's journey , hard balls maybe thrown yet we have to keep on walking to reach what we aimed for in life. We have to choose our fight. We don't have to fight everything that we don't agree with otherwise we end up losing our life time without achieving anything.
Hello and Many thanks Dear Duke Perry Abrokwa Really, it is a smart and an ironic comment at the same time about those people who see everything and experiencing it then they saying where we are?
After it's all said and done " What matter" is we arrive at our destination Really deep, great write
Thanks so much Dear Daniel for your unique comment, in the world of our poetry always the peace and good deed will win, but unfortunately in the reality the things are much different, I like your way of reading a poem, deep and calm, searching for the pulse of the heart in each work, well done...wish you every success
This is a desperate poem, because the world in which you wrote it invaded your poetic world and now shadows everything. But this contest, this AGON, is not everlasting. What is everlasting is your resistance to the Evil of the Time. Your assertion of poetic truth in the wasteland. The weight you carry so that your comrades can move freely to safety. This is your triumph ion actions and words.
Hello and thanks... Dear Daniel for your unique comment, in the world of our poetry always the peace and good deed will win, but unfortunately in the reality the things are much different, I like your way of reading a poem, deep and calm, searching for the pulse of the heart in each work, well done...wish you every success
The frozen death! Loneliness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
In the era of marginalised truth Who listens to the wounds of poetry? Rain of anguish pouring over the Umbrellas of sadness. Fine poem rich with images and poetic truths