Sunday, September 6, 2009

The Open Up Call Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beautiful words may carry away a painful curse.
And it is known but often forgotten
The word ‘life’ can’t be lived, nor can it be shared.
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dejen kidane
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Alison Cassidy 02 October 2009

This is very good Dejen. I poem well written and with a sound message about 'doing' rather than 'talking about it'. I particularly enjoyed your phrase: 'But a journey through the ink seems to be boundless.' A highly original and arresting expression. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Quin Faas 02 October 2009

inspiring- i could hear this piece being recited...

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Mubeen Sadhika 28 September 2009

Beautiful way to express. Nicely narrated. deserves 10++++

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