The Open Door Comments
Everything seems beautiful
Under the shade of hour glass.
Falling sand on hour glass
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P1 I came late to the door of the house of Varsha M not knowing if the hour glass was full or empty, time had swept me away like falling sands for a year and a half or more,
The poems 'Poet Poetic Paradise Flowers Fresh Watered' and 'The Dust Clothed Traveller' were inspired by this comment on the poem 'Wow Night Is Back...', by the poet Varsha M and dedicated to Varsha M.
P2 an afternoon sun was stretching time shadows upon silent footsteps as I laid poet's poetic paradise flowers fresh watered upon the threshold of a carved wooden door.
I wrote the poem 'I Came Late To The Door Of The House Of Varsha', inspired by the poem 'The Open Door', by the poet Varsha M and dedicated to Varsha.
uh-oh, this poem was written 2 years ago.... I hope our poet is still a part of PH
A profound poem that gives insight.Very perceptive lines that we need to ponder about. Revisiting this wonderful and brilliantly penned poem.
Respect the time and opportunities Which might not remain open for long---tis so true because life is fleeting, one day you are young, the next day you are in danger of stumbling and falling---ride for as long as you can!
I totally agree with your first couplet... everything looks colourful if we put on coloured glass!
An inspiring write! An open door may not give you opportunities --The road to success is challenging and one should be ready to face obstacles on the way!
Beautifully woven! .. Quite magical! .. Sometimes we may have the option of taking a leap of faith. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++
The exclamation inadvertently used at the first sentence should be taken as a question mark. This is truly a great poem.
Have I read this wonderful poem before! Everything looks beautiful when you see it through colourful glass... invited me
Refreshing and a wonderful self reflection. Line and line flows beautifully. 👏
Superb write Varsha...the title, the message and the way of expression all go well with each other...intelligent write...thank you
Walking on this path is challenging........brilliant.....thank u.
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7/18/2025 1:52:02 AM # 1.0.0
The poem captures a profound truth about life through its elegant imagery and reflective tone. The metaphor of the hourglass is particularly compelling, symbolizing the relentless flow of time and its ability to shape our dreams and aspirations.