The Open Cage Comments

A well penned poem. Truly touching...5 stars*****

Brilliant poem Akhtar Sahab! Just like the bird, who jumped out of the cage and injured itself, we humans too, at times, try to run away from our secure home. Only when we are hurt, we realise how much we need the support of our family or the master who takes care of us. The last line says it all. Full stars for the Master Poet.

A lovely poem.I can well relate to this poem.A parrot is kept in a cage with love and care.There is a bond of love between the master and the pet.Though the blue sky outside is quite alluring, it is not safe for the pet parrot which is quite accustomed to the small space of the cage and its wings have forgotten the art of flying.

You are the love of your lonely master. You feel the time as open cage. Doors are opened and windows are too. But many of us are inside home due to Corona fear. During shut-down and lock-down many of us were inside home which was like an open cage. You have gathered courage and jumped down. You have crawled with time and won the joy. Love for life makes you master...5 stars rating.

A wonderful poem! Brilliantly composed sir... liked it.