Sunday, September 10, 2017

The Only Worry Comments

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There descend Adam and Eve
and set their body and soul dancing in the moonlight
making a home below the stars.
Lo, the clouds came suddenly
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Valsa George 11 September 2017

Fantastic...! For you just an idea is enough to make a poem! You have built a beautiful heavenly hut..for Adam and Eve when they got expelled from Eden! How I wish I had your felicity of expression. I am glad my poem has inspired you in writing this beautiful work! A 10

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Khalid Saifullah 10 September 2017

A beautiful imagery...............................................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 September 2017

Lord will send the cloud. Cloud will do rain very much and Earth will become green. Amazing water flows through lovely water and mesmerizes mind. Rives merge in ocean gives us great teaching to merge ourselves with God in mind. Being worry is painful but being with God we can be happy. Nicely penned poem is shared excellently...10

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Rajnish Manga 10 September 2017

It is said that even the angels are jealous of human beings because of the richness of life on earth. The narrative appears to confirm this observation. Thanks a lot for a great composition. Thanks God for expelling us from the heavens. The only worry that is painful is that you'll call us back one day!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 10 September 2017

The only worry that is painful is that you'll call us back one day! Superb!

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