I never wished to be
a lonely sparrow
that lives in a luxurious
golden cage
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wow! it really really touch me! I enjoy all other poems from you but this is just amazing! thanks for sharing!
this poem says such a lot, reading not only the lines, but between them....i love it. thanks for sharing. Jen x :)
Dear Hemakumar, this is beautiful! Such wonderful images that build to a perfect denouement. Splendid poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
very beautiful poem. I was wondering where you were going w/ it until those last few lines, 'the golden' themed memory is really nice imagery 10/10
I am so glad I read this poem, it is just lovely and well constructed, thank you, Lynda x
OH this is so very gently penned with LOVE.... It really struck my heart... Excellent in my oppion........ Bonnie
An eloquent offering. Our memories no one can take from us. Lovely work indeed. Warmest regards, Sandra
Applause, applause! ! ! ! Very well written indeed, a soft lingering poem that leaves one relaxed and serene. Excellent. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Hemakumar, It is pleasant to me your unique and wise desires. If it will be interesting to you, May of desire read in a verse: ' But i`m woman' Thank you, Tsira
Beautiful poem, excellent flow, certainly a pleasure to feast one's eye's upon. I'am truly blessed this morning. Melvina
your negatives make your wish ardent, memory is beyond all... Explicit poem
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It is so beautifully written.
wow...such a simple notion which holds so much beauty and honesty...you are truely worth reading again and again...