Wednesday, March 12, 2008

The Only Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never wished to be
a lonely sparrow
that lives in a luxurious
golden cage
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
COMMENTS
Viola Grey 10 August 2008

wow...such a simple notion which holds so much beauty and honesty...you are truely worth reading again and again...

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Vilma Xelin 06 August 2008

wow! it really really touch me! I enjoy all other poems from you but this is just amazing! thanks for sharing!

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Jennifer Pryce 01 June 2008

this poem says such a lot, reading not only the lines, but between them....i love it. thanks for sharing. Jen x :)

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Alison Cassidy 24 May 2008

Dear Hemakumar, this is beautiful! Such wonderful images that build to a perfect denouement. Splendid poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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David Desantis 30 April 2008

very beautiful poem. I was wondering where you were going w/ it until those last few lines, 'the golden' themed memory is really nice imagery 10/10

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Lynda Robson 28 April 2008

I am so glad I read this poem, it is just lovely and well constructed, thank you, Lynda x

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Bonnie Collins 20 April 2008

OH this is so very gently penned with LOVE.... It really struck my heart... Excellent in my oppion........ Bonnie

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Sandra Fowler 20 April 2008

An eloquent offering. Our memories no one can take from us. Lovely work indeed. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Ernestine Northover 20 April 2008

Applause, applause! ! ! ! Very well written indeed, a soft lingering poem that leaves one relaxed and serene. Excellent. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ann Beard 19 April 2008

Lovely Hamakumar. hope you get your wish. Regards Ann

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Tsira Goge 14 April 2008

Hemakumar, It is pleasant to me your unique and wise desires. If it will be interesting to you, May of desire read in a verse: ' But i`m woman' Thank you, Tsira

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Melvina Germain 09 April 2008

Beautiful poem, excellent flow, certainly a pleasure to feast one's eye's upon. I'am truly blessed this morning. Melvina

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Amie-Lee ...... 03 April 2008

Nice work, thanks for sharing.

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Priyanka Shetty 30 March 2008

awesome poem.. i enjoyed reading it...

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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

your negatives make your wish ardent, memory is beyond all... Explicit poem

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Sreelekha Premjit 19 March 2008

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It is so beautifully written.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 March 2008

how i wishes your dreams would come true.........

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Rani Turton 16 March 2008

Very elegantly put and with an easy flow.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 March 2008

very beautiful and heartwarming..............

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Hannah Dean 12 March 2008

wow.. lovely poem - written and meant!

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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