The Only Way To Cross The River Of Fire Is By Drowning Comments

Yea very true. You can smile but it will never heal

By FAR deserving of the ten I'm rating it...it fits my life perfectly.

thank god, someone else understand the way it feels when you loose a love like that...it's a great poem. My favorite of yours so far.

Those are some real feelings and I know a lot of people would be able to relate. I really like your rhyming, it's not just typical 'You, do, who' kinda stuff. It's more thought out, it's what I try to do and I like it.

Brave through the fire if you have to, she'll be impressed and regreted when your dead.Good writes Bilal.

happiness can cover up alot of things but it cant cover up the things u feel.... when i cry my eyeliner shows how i feel

the las ttow lones gave you the score