Shy, uncertain with plenty of fears,
In your special eyes I became worthwhile,
That made me really smile,
With your complete presence,
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hi dear Hazel.... your poet was so beautiful and full of sentiment!
Your sweet goodbye fills all the ears with stars that fall.....iip
Here you are at once so emotionally involved and detached! A relationship that was so gratifying at onetime turned into incompatibility and finally it had to break up! But you don't seem to have any resentment for the man! With stronger wings you chose to fly to unknown skies with dignity and hope! A very candid portrayal of a love forsaken! A moving write! Thanks for the invitation!
i read it thrice and got a different meaning everytime then i realized that i am reading the poem of hazel an interesting poem to read and great poem to figure out a clever hand and a nice heart has resulted this praiseworthy works...
At first it was sounded so nice but at the end, it just unexpected to be that pain...you are stronger anyway..i can tell that...ahhh how much feelings you have put in this poem...it worked! ! and yes, Only truth matter! _SOul
Well expressed, the power in love is perhaps the best truth known as it does break all barriers, words artistically expressed Hazel nice poem.
This poem is great :) you made me feel like you had been feeling. -W
A sad poem of loves labours lost. I can feel the heartache but see an inner strength that shines through lifting you high above your old love. A good poem.
A great poem, it's when the flaws start to show that the problems start. Our feelings my not change, because you can't just switch them off. But what we want and need does change.
Of dignity, hope and truth, To soar with pride to unknown skies, Even though you made me say goodbye! A beautiful poem.