Wednesday, November 28, 2007

The Only Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

The only time
I got to say
My last goodbye
Hiding feeling pain
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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

death to save a life but that person life will be filled with pain so how about live to save a life or is this the road you heart has decided to take

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 May 2008

I view this with sadness and almost uselessness. I guess it is because of my own life. A hard read, but well done. GW62

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Amie-Lee ...... 24 February 2008

I like this poem too. It's quite different from all the other corny sadness poems. This one sounds like it's a little bit more genuine.

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Aldo Kraas 28 November 2007

I like it Thanks for sharing

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jazmine kristen 28 November 2007

awww see that one is good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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