The pressure of that blade
wishing anything you could trade
your life for another
the cold sweat on your face
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Suicide is never the answer for the problems faced by an individual. Things can be tough in this life though the best way to live this life is to never give up on it. I liked your poem as it touches the feelings.
Good expression of feelings, keep writing as in it you will find solace...you are worth much more living, I will come back to read more of your work - Cindy