Saturday, July 27, 2013

The Only Survivor (Prose) Comments

Rating: 4.2

When I looked upon your tiny
delicate face, pressed my
lips gently against a soft
cheek. Tickled your chin, you
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Heather Burns
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John Shea 31 July 2013

It was in 62...oops....I was twelve years old and count my blessings after a short coma. Only the good die young they say. Pup

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John Shea 31 July 2013

I was run over by the little old lady from Pasedena in 1962. My last comment said 1952. typo...I didnt walk away for thee weeks but here I am walking the walk and at my age feeling the aftermath at times. God Bless you and yours.Pup

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 July 2013

How traumatic it must have been. You expressed your feelings with depth. Thank you for sharing.

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Valsa George 28 July 2013

A beautiful recllection about a dear daughter mixed with the memories of a traumatic accident! The poem is made so warm by a mother's genuine concerns about a dear daughter! !

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Khairul Ahsan 27 July 2013

Thank God! What a relief!

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