The Only Man Standing Still Comments

Good work, I like this poem. Nilufer Dursun

i loved the last two lines, they really make the poem that much richer

i really like this poem its like this man is a light in the dark in which you cant look away from his sight. I like how you explain how pple telling u not to go to him and look at him then at the end how what if he was the only man standing still. Excellent, It reminds me of this one guy i know i love him like crazy and when i look into his eyes its like on a higher level and i cant look away and my friends also told me not to tlk to him cuz he would break my heart. Good work keep it up =)

Great poem, it's very fluid. I like the line with 'silent thrill' in it especially.

you leave the reader wondering if you could be right

I like this, specially the question in your last two lines. Great job