Saturday, July 25, 2009

The Only Gold. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Layering one on another,
caresses...........
Fly with gilted pen,
..........signing my destiny.
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Fay Slimm
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Mark Nwagwu 01 August 2009

Dipped in burnished ..........molten word, their dripping Nectar............. covers my tongue ...........the more I sip. This is heavenly, fay - simply fantastic. and this, an engaging style.10 mark finished writing this and then saw shashendra's comments using the same stanza - and i smiled!

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 July 2009

'Dipped in burnished ..........molten word, their dripping Nectar............. covers my tongue ...........the more I sip.' Oh gosh.. this is very delicious read Fay.... Hey i cant write like this.. I wish i can, but i cant... i mean i m sort of good at story telling more than anything... This is beautiful Fay... I mean i honestly don't know what else to say! ! ! with lots of love Shan

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Bob Gibson 25 July 2009

The more of the verse, the more I rehearse I cannot divulge, my passion my curse! I cannot believe, the power you hold I'm just a man! who's heart you hold!

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Kris Smith 25 July 2009

Classic love poem from the heart Fay 10 +++ Chris

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Tsira Goge 25 July 2009

Fai, It is original secret sincerity... Very beautiful poetics..10

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