Thursday, September 1, 2022

The Onlookers' Delight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is it the lotus gazing at the sun
Or the other way; or the bee buzzing
Hovering upon the rose as if rose likes it
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Indira Renganathan
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Nabakishore Dash 02 September 2022

Mutual gazing is the true attribute of love is very nicely depicted in your poem revered Mam.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 September 2022

It's a wonderful poem...I love this write. Top score! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2022

A beautiful poem so well crafted and expressed. Loved the title and opening lines of this lovely, lovely write.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 September 2022

With a touch of humor it is beautifully written. Loved the ending. Nice share.

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