Friday, March 29, 2013

The One Who Live In Me Comments

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Runaway from all shadows
Away from all wild voices
To the end of the world edge
Till the last stop to step
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Unwritten Soul
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Mj Lemon 08 May 2020

Amazing verse, Soul. We are never alone, and that companion within can indeed can make us 'strong.' Is this the conscience, the soul, the spirit? Are these different words for the same thing, or is each inner being somewhat different? I find the communication takes place in or through thoughts, with words that provide easy definitions somehow elusive. Such a great verse, Soul!

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Rebecca Navarre 16 December 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! How Breathtakingly Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Powerful And Deep! ! ! ! ! With Such Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Soul This Does Speak! ! ! ! ! Love It! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2017

We must know who are we? What is soul and where is it? Then we can give respect to other's soul. Dear Soul, you have nicely and astutely inscribed this poem. Here some lines may be quoted..... Only... Only my outside Outside the territory of my body You will ever know but cant be more Because behind the reflection of my face Unseen our hidden true and grace Where your right not belong here Change heart of mine to hurt Take over life like yours Because i was born with someone Someone who be with me since long The one who knows secrets and me The one The one who live within me This soul, my survivor soul A great poem presented touchingly.

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Rekha Mandagere 18 April 2013

Respect for one's soul is very important so that we can avoid many miseries in life. Best thought, best expression! Nice read: : -)

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Jaira Joyce Tentoco 16 April 2013

I agree. This is a good one. :) 0.......

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 April 2013

nice one. We all are looking for a person to give us the right guidence and the true way. Some 1 to make us feel superiour and better.but if we found that person(the best one in our ideas) some of us still think that there is something wrong and its because of a problem and the problem is that we dont know our selfs well.we dont reach our souls. Very well.very well.perfect This poem is so meaningful.

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Shahzia Batool 02 April 2013

Light and lovely poem...not at all silly...you have poured forth your soul in this poem...an enjoyable read...

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Valerie Dohren 31 March 2013

Without a soul we would be as automatons - beautiful Soul.

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Frank James Davis 31 March 2013

Profoundly wise and utterly lovely!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 March 2013

A great poem of the soul by Unwritten Soul.! KUDOS! !

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Lyn Paul 30 March 2013

You express yourself so very well and give something to so many who suffer being just.... themsleves. Great work Soul.

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Poetheart Morgan 30 March 2013

Hello Soul, what a beautiful expression of our souls. I agree with you, no paradise! We have to live and try to find our balance. Once more you teach us or remember us body and Soul. Kisses friend! ! !

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Hans Vr 30 March 2013

Wonderful poem, Soul. I agree very much with you, what you express in the poem and in your notes. If we cannot find our soul, we tend to be lost in paradise. Our soul knows the Truth (with capital T) and we have to try to connect, to tune in to our soul. When we try to connect to our Creator, it is through our soul. Fantastic insights in the spriitual part of our being are expressed here Excllent!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 30 March 2013

PH stole my coment on this poem, I will coment later....great poem again Soul. Siya_! !

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Kelly Seale 30 March 2013

Soul... this piece defines your work... your voice... your heart...your soul. It is a magnificant Write. (thank you for your comments on my most recent ;) Peace and Joy be with you...always. -Kelly.

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Neela Nath Das 30 March 2013

Soul, to run away from the madding crowd, to stay in one's self, to know one's own soul all these come from a sensitive soul. You are actually like that.Kudos again dear to your talent.

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Nader Baheri 29 March 2013

another great work.i always enjoy reading your works.i like specifically the last two parts. I think you have said your inner feelings in the poetical way and as your unwritten soul.we sometimes feel to run away from people and hide ourselves and be settled where only our soul and us are alone. Yes only you yourself and God know your soul. Let me add some thing at the end. In the latest twentieth i wish i had far from others when three of us would be alone God, me and my soul kudos~nb

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