Wednesday, June 10, 2009

The One Unmasked Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see him everyday
With a decieving mask on his face
It covers his griefs without a trace
Giving judgements no space
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Nashy Lamen 10 July 2009

Hmm.. You are a very good friend to me and to all your other friends.. Very nice dedication to Danzen.. Keep writing.. c:

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Danzen D. 14 June 2009

Whoever that Danzen is..I'm sure he will be so grateful and lightened when he read this...He's so blessed to have you as his friend, I'm very very sure that he thanks God for you and considers you as one of the most valuable blessings given him. Wonderful poem! Keep on writing! -smiles-

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james Xane 10 June 2009

This - is amazing. The words let the feelings rise so beautifully and simply. A marvelous write; keep writing.

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