The One That Lights My World Up Comments
You're the one that lights my world up,
During the dark days of my life;
Taking me out of oblivion,
Away from fret, away from strife.
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Another excellent write from the pen of a great Poet. Very inspiring. Beautifully penned.
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You're the one that turns the rain Into beauty of the sunshine; Allowing me to brave the storm, Making the cold vile weather fine.......// it's the poem on YOU; this " YOU" is the love; beautiful poem penned; like it; enjoyed
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7/28/2025 2:09:10 PM # 1.0.0
I am sure the 'You' referred here is God the Almighty! He is the one who lights up darkened paths, creates the inner glow in us, gives courage to brave the storms and guiding us through all adversities of life! One who realizes this will be blessed by Him! A beautifully rhyming devotional write! Top marks!