Wednesday, June 27, 2012

The One That Got Away Comments

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What have I been doing?
Apart from wasting all my time,
Watching you fall into his arms,
I sit alone and cry.
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Keiran Bateman
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Antonio Dias 27 July 2012

Great poem! I know exactly how you feel... I'm in that situation. Keep writing!

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Nurain Ali-balogun 03 July 2012

grt write I must say, hope u cn find tym to read one of my poems: Without you (is a dream coming true) , this poem reminds me so much about why I wrote it. All d best.

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Saadat Tahir 03 July 2012

I know you're his, I know he needs you too, But I just want you to know, That. I. Love. You. awe! ....kinda cute and clingy nice :)

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Theo Williams 03 July 2012

Whoaaaa that's sooo good! That's like really good! I have felt the exact before man. Girls ay: / I wish you the best you are very talented at such a young age! Keep penning. Sincerely, Williams, T.

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