Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Wednesday, July 15, 2015

The One That Got Away Comments

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I had a poem in my head
Today when I got out of bed
But when I went to write it down
It was not there; it had skipped town.
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Kim Barney
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Belle Wassermeister 28 August 2025

I think this has happened to all of us at one time or another. I know it has happened to me. Enjoyed the rhymes.

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Kim Barney 21 September 2022

Thank you very much, Dillip Swain, for adding this poem to your favorites!

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Valsa George 22 July 2015

This has happened in my case too! Sometimes thoughts and words flow unhinged! If we don't put them down into paper instantly, they easily flow out into the drainage, unable to be retrieved! Though terse, the poem comprises similar experiences of very many! I have expressed a similar dilemma in my poem- Stillborn!

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Spock The Vegan 15 July 2015

Maybe the fish clears out the brain. You look very tired in the photo - better take another long nap.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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