Wednesday, December 14, 2005

The One Kiss Comments

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The one kiss
I ought to have dismissed
Is haunting me like an unsettled ghost
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Sylvia Chidi
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Jasbir Chatterjee 03 June 2016

lovely poem...Indeed, as our journey continues our yearning for certain things grows and we have to keep reminding ourselves that they will not return...Congrats on being poet of the day!

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A creative and complling composition. Congrats!

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Kim Barney 03 June 2016

Wonderful poem, Sylvia. Congratulations for having it selected as Member Poem of the Day!

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B.m. Biswas 03 June 2016

Human nature.....and the tendency to be indulged in making forbidden or wrong things...yes we can't always avoid seven deadly sins like temptation or greed......thanks... Congrats being member poet.....keep sharing..

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2016

The kiss of the forbidden apple! ! Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 03 June 2016

How an innocent act of kissing can lead to an obsession of sorts, has been explained so passionately by the poet. Thanks. I would like to quote: Time has passed, My mind still wanders without rest To forget, I try to do my best

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