Saturday, November 16, 2019

The One I Love The Most Comments

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The one I love the most is You,
You really care for my whole life;
You embrace me with Your warm arms,
Protecting me from the cold strife.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 November 2019

Excellent write, Bernard. So beautifully written. Each and every stanza stands out. It expresses the wonderful attributes of a loved one. Lovingly penned. Amazing quatrain.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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