The One I Love Comments

This is a great poem. I think everyone has been in a situation or will be at some point in there life. you captured it well.

i know exactly how you feel and i still havent figured out how to deal with the situation: (

Excellant painting of words.

I t reallymake a soft glove to mind, nice to read You Make My Heart Beat Fast You Make Me Feel Alive When You Kiss My Cheek I Feel Like Where Alone I Like It When You Look At Me It Makes

A heartfelt piece, showing another pace of love saying ' If you love someone set him free if he comes back to you he is yours'...a sacrifice of the one who is truly loving....Great Thanks...