Friday, November 30, 2012

The One I Love Comments

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I loved you from the start
And I gave you my heart
Hope we will never be apart
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Batool Abdulhafid
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Unwritten Soul 01 December 2012

The start of the poem is easy, easy to bind to heart and then go flow to the rhyme and feeling as you lead us with the companion of lovely words...such a beautiful and really blissful..keep writing my friend_Soul

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Teasia Ruffin 30 November 2012

aww. i love this poem. i feel the same way about my other half

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