The One Flaw Comments

She can fight to the end for what she thinks is right She has such great power of endurance And the gift of intuition, but…. but, As nothing of this world is perfect This woman too has one serious flaw She tends to forget her own worth" .......outstanding conceptualization. The creation of God is so wonderful. You have so incisively delineated this poem with a vast outlook. It is really a great tribute to God and women. Thank you dear madam.10

God replied in assured tone; She is soft, I agree, from hilt to heel, But equally tough……… None can guess what she can accomplish! She can fight to the end for what she thinks is right She has such great power of endurance And the gift of intuition, but…. but, As nothing of this world is perfect This woman too has one serious flaw She tends to forget her own worth Awesome tribute to the most beautiful creation of god...she can withstand all the attributes and has the heart to forgive and forget... she is perfect in spite of the flaws. Very beautiful message nourishing inner self with love and respect should be the priority of every woman. A beautiful masterpiece from your pen Valsa. Loads of love.10 plusssss

oops! read it and liked it ALREADY. no use just liking it all over again! how about # 211 (our street address #) ? bri :)

The qualities of a woman are detailed and presented so perfectly here that I totally got awestruck. What a lovely tribute to a woman! ! ! ! ! ! !

A Fantastic poem Valsa. Yes, one can tell a masterpiece...The beautiful way you have portrayed woman. It is very true said.....Just one flaw...changed her entire life. Loved it much.

A great tribute to women with 'The one flaw'..........Valsa.......that she tends to forget her own worth carries great significance......forgetting her own potential..........I will say this piece a masterpiece.........deserves more than 10

You have repainted the sketches of 'God' and added to their relevance in concept and decorum attributed. The one flaw showcased is perhaps the most significant thing in the case of a woman who is close to perfection. 'God and angels' engaged in funny and meaningful conversation is a great soothing thing for most. I have often mistaken God to be highly taciturn or reserved in nature. But your 'God' is very frank and sociable. May be, means can justify the ends at times and that holds true for your poem. It is a great literary piece and I give 10 for it, madam

Strong enough to withstand all the shocks But delicate enough to bend and bow Sweet enough to draw everyone to her charm But tough enough to bear extra burden Characteristics nicely put. One who is all powerful tends to forget own capabilities. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

This woman too has one serious flaw She tends to forget her own worth... how subtle, Valsa ji...a wonderful narrative piece among all the other Eve-write ups with a deep message to the Eve of the present times or all times...this one is not only a story but a drama in dialogues, an epic-fragment in itself, a fine narrative to make women realize their worth... a piece composed with your heightened and heated imagination!

This woman too has one serious flaw She tends to forget her own worth No doubt init. With projections and depressions Curves and slants here and there Bold and beautiful.

God wished Man to be in His own image With much care He moulded a figure Breathing life into it, He called him Adam the fruit of spirit is love and joy, man really as God, and he enjoy life here

And a wonderful and enjoyable story it is! What a wonderful ending also! Kudos to you on this great imaginative write!

not only women, human tribe as a whole focuses more on its weakness than its potential. a wonderful eye opener Valsa.