Thursday, February 2, 2012

The One... Comments

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The one calls out to me in the blackness of night,
I hear her, but do I really hear what must be heard?
Is it her? Or is it yet another charlatan seeking her throne?
Trying to trap me with the echos of such a sweet perfection.
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Kaila George 15 February 2012

This is a beautiful poem...dont we all ponder about the right one...will we ever meet that one person that knows us in an instant...in a moment...in a single heartbeat...we meet someone...we think they are the one...then as time goes on...we realize...no..they are not the ONE...sigh...are we ready to take that risk again...do we open our hearts once more...only time can tell...this poem moved me to tears...bravo...bravo

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Pheko Motaung 04 February 2012

I appreciate every truth in this beautiful poem, A great read, Thank you

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