Thursday, February 25, 2010

The One Comments

Rating: 5.0

in her eyes, see the skies;
see the world with no disguise;

in her heart, see the start;
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Arik Fletcher
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Rachael Curtis 25 February 2010

This is brilliant! Lots of love poetry can be a bit tacky when rhyme is introduced, but yours is not at all! Its very clever and very sweet!

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