Thursday, January 16, 2014

The Omen Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a clatter of hooves on the dusty road,
then the strident sound of the old school bell.
For a stranger stands in the village square
and he has a terrible tale to tell.
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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Valerie Dohren 16 January 2014

Excellent Thomas, a great tale brilliantly told.

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Cleveland Gibson 16 January 2014

I enjoyed this poem of yours because it had a terrific element of drama wrapped into the very words. A good narrative and well told. IMO Thank you Cleveland

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