# The Oldest Pair Comments
even if the woman receives 'a man' from her man
she delivers him as soft and silky as woman
the moon mom receives the valient sun's fiery sunshine.....
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Beautiful imagination...nobody earlier would have thought of moon and sun as amma and appa I suppose..extraordinary poem
The moon and the sun, the oldest pair....wonderful image, Samanyan. Best Wishes Naseer
The Creator and His creations...........an ever existing pair who represents the yesterday, today and tomorrow...........10+++ for this lovely poem.
to me the oldest pair would be GOD and universe. the poem has to get you to think about what is truely being said. good write
Insightful write with very aptly used metaphors! Thanks, roshni.
An interesting write Sam, unique and refreshing, well penned, 10 Lynda xx
Absolutely captivating. A luminous write.10, for your rich imagination. Warm regards, Sandra
wow..unique thoughts.. very elegant ideas.. flowing with depth...very meaningful... the oldest pair...very symbolic.. of patience, love and understanding.. of togetherness even on odd times... thanks for sharing this, Sam... 10++ for this, my friend
A nicely penned verse. The idea opens a new world. Thanks for sharing the poem.
a write of good relationship maybe..like in symbiosis? Just a guess of a theme as I can't comprehend the implication....
Well, some people might think this is a nice poem, samanyan, but I cannot figure it out at all. It just seems to me to be a collection of random lines with little relationship to each other. I am just not into ethereal poetry where you have to guess what the poet is trying to say. Carl.
Nice imagery Samanyan....drawing a parallel between the sun and the moon and the father and mother pair... very interesting write...10
famtastic.. I love how you tied their relation together.. giving them souls
sun and moon...the oldest pair...yes, perhaps...impressive piece SLN
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What amazing vision you have Sam....stunning composition