# The Oldest Love Comments
my first love poem
happens to be the world's oldest one
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the seashore wind and the tree in the shore
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Eternal love is among the gifts of nature, e.g.wind and tree, tree and sea etc.They make their love obvious, oblivious of the privacies.BRILLIANT IDEA.
original images put in a dramatic scene. Thank you for sharing.
I love how you write because it is complicated the first couple of times through, and then it just clicks in the head. A trait that always eludes me in my own personal writing... The way you compare the wave to a naughty female is classic. It is profound and maybe, if you look at it right, a little bit humorous... Another poem to ponder on when I am just sitting around with my token female friend. Thank you.
nice...very nice...the tree the waves and the sea...wonderful story
A very vivid imagery and an exquisite imagination make this poem a delight to read.10.
To be frank.... In love there is nothing OLD Everything is GOLD So you may call it a golden era Your fist love poem...drives away the October cold to shine like a gold.
Really nice imagery and use of a natural event to explain an emo experience.
How lovely is this; just proves again, that to take the most simplest of humble things, you can elevate them without limit, by merely writing about nature as it takes it's daily course. Love everything about this..cheers, Patti
wonderful lyric symbolistic poem, very wise written, thank you for sharing.......10+++++++++
The old love poem is crafted carefully and thoughtfully. Nice composition.
Beautiful expression of love. Well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
This truly a beautiful love poem with its stupendous images! a first rate poem 10+++
A very good first poem. A beautiful love affair. Good write. Your friend Lynn
a lovingly written oldest love poem with such rich imagery.
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Love and romance with Nature and She knows how to up-pull these elements of love in poet’s psyche Ten. dr. sakti Cordially invite to my page [poem] read / comment and…. ds