The Old Yellow Brick Road Comments

i have three former wives, none of which i parted with due to death. the divorces became final before the poisons kicked it and did their job. " lover's load" ....i'm afraid to guess at what you are referring to, friend. bri :)

Along old yellow..........do us part.I would like to quote every line.Highly artistic, endowed with feelings and realisation of life in a world very different from others.Thanks for sharing dear poet.Huge 10

Thanks for a magical glance into your past travels on the yellow brick road Hazel.....not always a wonderland for sure. I was swept along on this talented write Hazel....👍

In the fields of time! With the joy of your heart. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

Sublime read... you are gifted in the art of words and turning them into someting magical xxx

Marvellous depiction with nice diction. Away from casanova and love to new until death....wonderful imagery......10

There are so many toads in this life and too few princes. Lovely poem that made me remember past loves.

So the old love is replaced by a new one! Let it be abiding and ever strengthening with the passage of time! Let life give you a lot of sweet experiences to be recollected now and then in life! Enjoyed the poem, Hazel!

Life ever after with a rose for my heart, That loves my new love until death do us part. Nice and impressive..................10