Wednesday, July 22, 2020

The Old Wooden Bridge Comments

Rating: 5.0

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in the darkness up ahead
just beyond the last fork in the road
there is an old wooden bridge
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Susan Williams
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 13 July 2022

Hello Susan, you've set aside an enigma for readers to ponder about. Remain enriched.

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Susan Williams 08 November 2020

Ooooh! v Thanks for faving this poem- -makes me feel good that people want to read a poem of mine over and over! ! I am so glad you enjoyed reading this! ! And thank you for the 5+! ! ! !

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Yiyan Han 27 October 2020

Wow, Love this 5+ piece and on my fav list! That definitely is not " for thee or me"

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Susan Williams 08 November 2020

yiyan- - I am so glad you enjoyed reading this! !

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Susan Williams 23 August 2020

Geeta, wow! ! It is a high compliment how deep you explore a poem! ! ! Thank you for your acute observations.

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Susan Williams 23 August 2020

Jez. I think I replied but PH is losing these replies or misfiling them, so I shall respond again. Your questioning reveals that you delve deeply into the poems you read! That is the best comment that can be made! ! Thank you, dear Jez

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Susan Williams 23 August 2020

I think I replied to you earlier, Bernard, but it isn't showing up so I shall try again. Thank you for your response and encouraging words

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Susan Williams 22 August 2020

Thank you, Bharati! ! ! I always look forward to your take on my efforts!

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Susan Williams 21 August 2020

Smoky Hoss, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem! ! ! !

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Smoky Hoss 04 August 2020

Strong, thoughtful and contemplatively beautiful poem. Superb!

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Susan Williams 02 August 2020

Wow! ! I am pleased, dear Sylvia, that you enjoyed this spooky trip over the old wooden bridge! ! !

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Susan Williams 02 August 2020

Mj, my dear dear friend, we all face that bridge sooner or later, ready or not. Thank you for delving into this with your understanding soul. And thank you for the 10 as well! !

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Susan Williams 02 August 2020

Thank you, thank you, thank you. Thank you, Anjandev, for your encouraging words

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Susan Williams 02 August 2020

Hazel! ! ! ! That, my dear, is a comment that could be written about many of your own very atmospheric and hauntingly beautiful poems! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 02 August 2020

Poem: 58820754 - The Old Wooden Bridge Member: Jez Burl Comment: Very evocative mm Susan! It makes me pause a while and think, " Shall I dare to cross that bridge? " what if that is the only bridge that will take me to the other place where I want to go? but that bridge won't take me there?

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Susan Williams 02 August 2020

I wonder if PH is ever going to post this comment. Your muse is a powerful one! ! Thank you, Edward, for reading and commenting

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Susan Williams 31 July 2020

Soran, He does, you know., wait for us out there...

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Susan Williams 31 July 2020

Oh, Soran, thank you very much for that compliment! ! ! Wouldn't that be an honor and a half to have this be Poem of the Day? ? ? Thank you for that thought, Soran!

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Susan Williams 31 July 2020

I thank you for pointing out the passage you particularly liked, Soran. That is helpful to know

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Susan Williams 31 July 2020

Thank you so very much, Soran. Lengthy metaphors are difficult in one way but I find they also give guidance to the direction and vocabulary of the poem. I am pleased that you enjoyed this poem so much- that means a lot to me!

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Susan Williams 31 July 2020

Hey again, Mohammed Asim Nehal- Thank you for reading me! ! And for the starry-eyed 10's

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