Friday, December 8, 2017

The Old Temple Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadows are getting heavier
darkness is getting thicker
uder the old temple
Chants are heard from far away
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Kostas Lagos
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 August 2018

Chants are heard from far away sounds of ages past The scent of incese never stopped filling the space...........dark so bright...... bright darkness, chiming that only i hear....... was i really sleeping..... a very poetic poem full of imagination......... thank u dear poet. there is mystery in this poem and in the mind of the priest.......... thank u daer. tony

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Kostas Lagos 27 August 2018

Thanks Tony! Glad you liked it...

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Rajnish Manga 09 December 2017

Interesting imagery with a string of lovely expressions. Thanks for sharing. A dark so bright / is blinding my eyes roughly awakes me / But was I / really asleep?

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