Tuesday, January 20, 2009

The Old Sad Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Again from my eyes
Tears were falling down
Is it a naivety having you on my own?
Accompanying me to get through that way
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COMMENTS
Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 January 2009

hey, a wonderful poem. very touching. truly. thank you friend.

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Ency Bearis 30 January 2009

beautiful write..and nice creativity...10

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Fiona Davidson 30 January 2009

nice poem....thanks....

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Kesav Easwaran 29 January 2009

yes...really so...that's a nice question nice request, Little...what a disturbed soul often wants is not soothing words but sweet response to revive the sagging spirit...beautiful write...10

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Brianna Trombley 29 January 2009

very touching and filled wth emotion, it makes me sad reading it, wonderful poem tho

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Mimi Fakhira 29 January 2009

I can picture the moments you described in your poem... and that is very good! You've got a nice style of writing, keep it up! 10/10 MIMI

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Min Sia 21 January 2009

Oh there's something wrong..the reason why he continue to sing that old sad song... Very well penned..emotions uplifted... Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!

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