Friday, April 13, 2007

The Old Ploughman Comments

Rating: 5.0

He lifts the old cup to his mouth like a cross,
a breakfast table Communion of brown tea and toast.
He goes out, one foot firmly in front of the other.
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Stug Jordan
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Elysabeth Faslund 25 August 2007

You have nailed down concrete images of a not-so-simple ploughman's daily life in this poem! In words and word paintings, making the lines easy to follow, and heart-rending to realize the truth of. Oh no, people! This is definitely NOT a dull poem...there is extraordinary life here, in abundance! ! ! Great, good, BEST! xxElysabeth

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