Saturday, March 8, 2008

The Old Ones Comments

Rating: 5.0

They sit in quiet rows upon folded linen sheets,
They gaze with quiet eyes upon the empty streets.
No movement stirs their breast, no strong heart beats,
The rows of quiet old ones, on padded seats.
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Paul C. Maybury Jr.
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Chitra - 08 September 2008

a touching write! 10

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Colin Jeffery 20 August 2008

A very moving poem by a very good poet.

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Ron Flowers 19 August 2008

I like this poem. Ron

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Konjit Berhane 08 March 2008

hey this is a great poem esp. these lines The rows of old ones quiet lie. Occasionally one of them will cry. Occasionally one of them will sigh. Occasionally one of them will die. thanx for sharin koni

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Paul C. Maybury Jr.

Paul C. Maybury Jr.

Baltimore, Maryland, USA
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